Teen Poetry #6 |
Torn |
stephanie Junior Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 33 |
Your world is perfect Everything is right but to the world your life's nothing but a fight. You can't win for losing and you're never on top maybe for a second but trust me you'll drop. You'll fall back and so far down everything you thought perfect for some reason isn't found. That happiness you felt so deep within your heart was nothing but deception your worlds been ripped apart. You can't find the strength to even smile anymore your heart feels empty your heart is torn. |
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roxywrestlegirl04 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 74good ole DINWIDDIE |
"stephanie"..hehe....this is a great poem...it is completly true to an extent...i LOVE it!! keep up the great work!! LIZ |
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Stinky Twinkie Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 204Dinwiddie |
it was a well written poem but I didnt really like it. not that my opinion matters... |
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rxyfxy04 Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 54lil' town in Virginia |
tippy.. i hadnt read that one yet.. i like it though. hopefully you have cheered up though!! love ya girl travis.. ur opinion does matter!lol RxyFxy04 |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
pretty good ri Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
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