Teen Poetry #6 |
Challenge #3- Alright, so I'm late!! |
Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I'm a product of environment- a little precious wonder. Everyday, so different, each morning start anew. What I wanted yesterday, I now could do without. What sparked my interest for so long- now just a small, chilling ember. Never knowing what it is, that throws me far off track. 'Procrastination Station'- ALL ABOARD: seems labeled to my forehead. Start things off with such a bang... delays ensue with wimpers. My head so lost among the clouds, yet toes still scrape the dirt; There is not much, left to say. Please, now hold on tight. Strap yourselves on in and hope- because with me you never know. You might be in for a ride. Thanks for helping me write again, I've been so busy lately is utterly ridiculous. Hope this met the challenge. "I keep looking, looking for something more." Sara Evans [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (11-26-2002 02:23 PM).] |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
quote: haha loved that. i think you did well on this Jenn. You met the challenge in my book. Hope you have time to keep writting. I miss seeing your poems in PiP. “A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.” |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Nice, met the challenge def. I agree with ks up there. I like that line * listens to song inside head ** Good work Riley Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Jenn~ No question about it. You met the challenge beautifully! I'm glad this helped you to get the ink flowing again. You've done a nice job on this and I particularly enjoyed this... "My head so lost among the clouds, yet toes still scrape the dirt;" Very nice...I like very much. Thanks for responding to the challenge. I hope to see lots more poetry from you. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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