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Teen Poetry #6

Without you

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

0 posted 2002-09-21 11:55 PM

Life isn't worth it,
without you.
I have nothing,
without you.
Without you im ,
The rain,
without puddles.
Without you I thought I was,
nothing.
But when I was with you I was nothing too.
So without you,
I am me,
Whoever that may be.

~*Azi*~

[This message has been edited by Match (09-21-2002 11:58 PM).]

LadyDracaWolf
Member

since 2002-09-19

Posts 73
CA

1 posted 2002-09-22 12:40 PM

Life is full of ups and downs. It is kinda like riding a roller coaster blindfolded. You never really know when the next up or down is coming, and you are never truly prepared for it.

Death is not extinguishing the light;
it is putting out the lamp
because the dawn has come.

Rabindranath Tagore
Poet, Philosopher, Nobel Laurea

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

2 posted 2002-09-22 12:28 PM

This is pretty good. I like how you say you are the rain "without puddles." Is that to say that you are all output and no result? That you have so much to give, but nothing to recieve it?

That image was what really made me think. Thanks for the great read.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

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