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Teen Poetry #6

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Baby_Angel123
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 63
Unity, ME

0 posted 2002-09-21 04:10 PM

All New

New town,
new school,
new faces,
new friends,
a whole new life,
in which I live.

A life so different,
from the last,
a life I wish,
I never had.

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

1 posted 2002-09-21 05:13 PM

I like this. Short, but to the point. Well done!

Kielo

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

2 posted 2002-09-22 07:11 AM

You said alot in a few words here, well done for not getting too long winded, you got your point across well here, well done

Anya

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

3 posted 2002-09-22 09:31 AM

I know how you feel it alway difficult making it in a new place

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

4 posted 2002-09-22 12:42 PM

Not bad at all. Very simple, and to the point, as Keilo said.

Nice work.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

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