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devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

0 posted 2002-11-22 06:30 PM

Perfect eyes
Smiing brightly in their own way
Perfect lips
Speaking words in ways only dreamt
Perfect breath
Breathing softly down my neck
Perfect Boy
I wish he was mine
I wish he was real
____________________________________________________

Sam,Cathy and Sara..You know who this is about.... But he is real I just cant have him.... Darn that hotness of his!!!!!!!!!
LOL *Allison*

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

1 posted 2002-11-22 06:32 PM

P.S. Sorry if this stinks

My muse is on vacation I guess..LOL
*Allison*

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

2 posted 2002-11-22 06:33 PM

Hey! I thought I wanted something I could never have, but now I have it!!! well.. except this whole, aaron, mom, and dad thing.. a slight disfunction, but who cares..lol!

Ne way.. I like this...
You like his breath on ur neck.. lol.
yea ne way, i'm gonna add this to my librbary, cuz it remends me of stuff... heh..

~sara

Close your eyes and begin to breathe. Something's coming over me. Lost to find, and a soul to keep. Because you love me...

[This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (11-22-2002 06:49 PM).]

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

3 posted 2002-11-22 08:11 PM

hey,
thank u for giving me the opportunity to use this smilie:

this poem doesnt stink
and i like this one

but this was good! and hey he talked to u today thats a start!
never give up hope lol that sounds funnny
~samantha~

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

4 posted 2002-11-22 08:29 PM

So tell the truth, this is about kevin

I'm kidding, but hey hes irresistable, its in the genes

This doesnt "suck" it shows how you feel about this "perfect boy." He sounds great...

~lisa

And this little masochist, she's ready to confess

-Tori Amos

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

5 posted 2002-11-22 09:20 PM

this was awesome allison!!!i no that it told how u felt cuz u told be about it today i think that he prolly likez u even if he dont yet....he likez u the tinyest bit.unfortuatly john dont like me but thatz ok if rex dont work there r otherz but whut did i tell ya?!?rex will be ur best bet!!!

CAthy

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

6 posted 2002-11-23 11:30 AM

JOHN LIKES YOU CATHY!!! As Amanda said..he`d be crazy not to! But he isn`t crazy!And if he is they hav pills for that right?? LOL
LCBS-NO...this isnt about kevin..I seem to have given up on kevin..LOL But yea..he is perfect...*sigh*
*Allison*

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2002-11-25 02:17 AM

Allison~
I like this. Short, sweet and to the point,
yet it doesn't lose it's message.
Nicely done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

8 posted 2002-11-29 02:39 PM

aww... i was reading this poem, and my old reply, and now I'm all sad...

good poem still!

"Close your eyes and begin to breathe.
Something's coming over me.
Lost to find, and a soul to keep.
Because you love me."
~finch~

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