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Teen Poetry #6

lonely

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

0 posted 2002-11-29 12:23 PM

thanksgiving it is,
yet here i am,
all alone and sad.

wanting things to be not like this,
wanting u my love here with me.

i just detest this life,
cos it hurts so much,
when u cant be with the one u love.

i love u so much it hurts,
thot i was strong enuff to handle love,
but now i know,
love isnt about strenght.

for me its about missing u,
and wanting to be with u,
wanting to kiss u,
wanting to dance with u,
but all i ever get it none of it.

i'm tired,
maybe i should just let u go.
i dont like this helpless feeling,
maybe this just isnt the rite time,
for me to love,
cos if it is,
i dont think it'll hurt this much.

cant bear being away from u anymore,

it breaks me...

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

1 posted 2002-11-29 02:51 PM

...or maybe it's a test to see if your love can pull through the hardships. Very good write, I've been in your shoes. Keep strong, if it's meant to be, your love will be able to pull through.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

quik
Member

since 2002-11-27

Posts 91
Dinwiddie,Virginia

2 posted 2002-11-29 02:54 PM

Sounds really good. I say you have a real talent and keep it up. Thats what i do and just keep going from there. I try my best for other people to get ideas and to see how they like my poetry. See ya hope to hear from you and i have a poem on the archive

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