Teen Poetry #6 |
VENTING |
ShadyMakaveli Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 128 |
Got me feeling low Am I wrong in my ways A world i don't know Searching for better dayz Desires are unobtainable Teared apart from inside This pain is unexplainable My dreams being denied Cautious with my actions Afraid of getting hurt Caught up in distractions Left alone in the dirt Stuck battling my thoughts Always taking a step back Never peace, i'm distraught My weaknesses under attack Struggling to see the light Making changes, yet no results A past that wasn't done right No one to blame, it's my fault |
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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
hey I really like this. my favorite line was struggling to see the light. Any pointers sorry don't have any. you did a good job on this " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
Im in love with this poem good job YOUR INSULTS AND YOUR CURSES MAKE ME FEEL LIKE IM NOT A PERSON ~Staind~ |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
nice vent ri Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
hey, i'm glad to see you posted again i really like reading ur poems when i heard better dayz i automatically thought of the new tupac cd this was good keep postin ~samantha~ "sometimes i just feel like |
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