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Teen Poetry #6

Down The Left

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

0 posted 2002-11-13 07:06 PM

Down the left(clue!)isn't the real name of this poem. The real name is hidden in the poem somewhere. Just see if you can figure it out.

Resist this house
Over the hill, and past the
Oblong trees
Memories of murder from one room where,
Occult and torture
Never ceased and souls
Ever last within its walls
Everything is wrong
Leave this room, At least try
Even though its too late
Vapors seeping like dead fog
Evaporate... They're in you now
Never will they let go.

[This message has been edited by Darkness (11-14-2002 01:27 PM).]

palmerj
Junior Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 30
Coxsackie, NY

1 posted 2002-11-13 11:17 PM

i know i know! but I wont spoil it for other ppl =)

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

2 posted 2002-11-14 01:29 PM

Oh so you think you've got me all figured out huh? We shall see!

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