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Darkness Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies. |
I don't know why, You left me out, To rot in the hot sun, Flesh bleached... Black. My blisters are open, You're all dressed up, Like a doctor but, When you try to help, You purposely pour salt in. You've given me, No respect. I've never got, Any respect. And I don't, Need respect. I am who I am and, That's all I can, And all I know. I won't change, In case you were, Wondering... I remain strong, In my... Everything Armor. |
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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
Your very Self secure...and you let that pour out in your writing. You won't take anything from anyone. Your a very strong person. Your voice in your writing is amazing. You capture i well " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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Darkness Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies. |
Thanks! I used to take a lot from people. I used to just lay on the cold ground because the people I thaught were my friends made me. Then they would kick me and punch me for about fifteen minutes. I didn't do anything because I was weak, emotionally that is. But in a way I thank them for that because it opened me up and now I don't take nothin' from nobody. I am a lot stronger now. |
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