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Teen Poetry #6

A Thousand Tears

laurie
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 153
canada, ontario

0 posted 2003-06-09 11:28 PM

l've done some things,
and lived some lies.
Cried a thousand tears,
and hurt the people
they say l'm to love.
Where my heart lies,
beating forever steady
in my chest you'll find
a woman of stone;
a soul of ice.
A thousand tears more,
cried through the night,
the pain come and gone,
only to come back again,
the child never the same.
They know l hurt,
these people l'm told to love;
family.
But they don't know why,
and it's deeper
than the hidden pain;
above and beyond
life's constant agony
you'll find a soul of rage,
hiding.
Always without end,
and there through the ages;
even in death you'll find anger.
A soul lives on?
A thousand tears cried,
and death not sought,
but pain and life without oblivion,
a thousand tears cried
as punishment's gift.

snoduck
Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 99
Selah, WA

1 posted 2003-06-09 11:42 PM

Interesting style. I like it none the less. Well this is a great poem, and for only having been writing for 4 months you're very good. Keep up the good work and I'll be looking for more of your work. Thanks for sharing.

-Erica-

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

2 posted 2003-06-10 12:01 PM

I haven't been on here in a long time so I think this is the first thing of yours that I've read. I like this poem a lot. I'll be looking for more of your work.
::Jen::

If you listen hard enough silence can mean more than words.

laurie
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 153
canada, ontario

3 posted 2003-06-10 12:05 PM

thanx, erica, jen. l'm glad you liked... can't say that l did, but hey.
laurie.

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