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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
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0 posted 2003-06-10 06:15 AM


something on my mind you could say this is my thoughts and i just had to write them down not bothered if sense wasnt made here just read and replie to what you think thanks
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Imagine if your world was taken from you
Would you run or hide in fear of loss
Or embrace this new life that you entered

Would it change you in anyway?
Would it take your mind away?
Or would you be born again anew

We all question the answers we give
For an answer forms the question
And the question forms the answer

Everything opposite is looped together
It is all part of the life’s we live
Females and males join together

I believe that our souls are split in two
Searching for each other through love
Knowing happiness awaited us



© Copyright 2003 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
BrokenDreams
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since 2003-02-09
Posts 425
In The Clouds
1 posted 2003-06-10 10:29 AM


hmm...interesting. It definetely made me think. I've asked myself those questions before. Haven't really come up with decent answers, but I'll get there eventually. I like how this was written, and I especially love the second stanza.
::Jen::

If you listen hard enough silence can mean more than words.

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