Teen Poetry #6 |
lighting the way |
dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
(getting myself ready for when i see 8 mile thanksgiving weekend!!! amanda is kool) i saw you staring at her my sudden heartache no one could cure your hand in hers my heart torn out but thats not what love is about i didnt want to be by you all the stories you told were untrue us together forever, nothing could be better is what you said but on her shoulder rest your head we are no more, with every decision i make, i am unsure you were the light, that made everything alright "sometimes i just feel like |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
i liked this sam i no itz about marshall o0o0o0o baby "I am who I am who I am who am I?" |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
OMG, man.. Cathy and her smilies.. I just cant take it!!! Yea.. Anyway, to your poem. I liked this poem. and POEM is in bold because it was, in fact, a poem, a poem in which I liked. It broke away from all the rap-ish stuff you've written before... and by the way... even though you're in love with Marshall, and what not, (lol, do i sound funny?) doesn't mean you have to write like him ... and I'm not saying that your poems (heehee) suck or anything, because i like them, but yea- evolve into your own person.. la la la la la Do i sound like a counselor? I think I do. ha ha ha ha ha SHOOT ME! yea- anyway.. Sorry for rambling, but I think it's fun!!! You should ramble in my replies, okay? okay! Great write.. ttys!! ~sara~ "It's something I have to do..I was there too..before everything else..I was like you.." |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
OH yea.. this reminds me of that one guy... who likes that one band.. that you get mad at me about when i talk about him alllll the time.. ya kno him?? I'm glad u wrote it.. you got me thinking.. This thing scares me, though. it reminds me of this one dream i had.. but instad of getting happy.. it ate me!! |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
lmao sara u r hilarious!!get back from eatin your pumpkin pie already!!! and yes sam amanda is the kewlest!!you will only see me replyin now so ttyl!!!i dont no now i like this smiley too!! "I am who I am who I am who am I?" |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
I like it..I love when people break away from their regular style. You did very well with this one....But I`m confused...Who`s amanda? |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
I actually wasn`t finished but I pressed submit reply instead of the smilies. But it was sposed to say: Who`s amanda? I`m not feelin so well..I have this gay cold that my mom gave me.. Also I was readin one of your away messages (cathy) and it said that you and angela katie and sam saw The Ring..Which katie were u talkin bout? cause katie kaiser said that she didnt go wit u guys...I am s bit confused.. |
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