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rimmie
Junior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 45
Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada

0 posted 2002-11-10 04:24 PM

How can you hate something this much?!?
Something so pure and inocent
Something that you helped to create
I've always been told "It would be your choice"
But when the time comes I am simply stared at in discust
You always told me "I will be there nomatter what...I love you"
But thats talk and now I'm simply a "whore"
The one thing I want you to know is that this is your child
And I want you to remeber for as long as you live that you took away a life that wasnt yours to take
For as long as I breathe I will never forget what I am prepared to do because I don't want to lose you

[This message has been edited by rimmie (11-10-2002 05:05 PM).]

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

1 posted 2002-11-10 04:35 PM

Omg Rimmie!
I loved this...It's sooooooooo like....Umm whats the word i want...It's sooooo true...
Yup thats what I wanted to say!
I LOVE LOVE LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's awesome...really it is!
I hope to see more super work from you!

rimmie
Junior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 45
Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada

2 posted 2002-11-10 05:00 PM

Thanks Delaney! I value your oppinion and am glad u liked it!!!

~RuZ~

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2002-11-10 06:17 PM

Aw, *hugs* hon... I told you I'd be there for you, and I'm not going to go back on that, okay? It's YOUR decision... if he loved you he wouldn't make you do something you don't want to do... *hugs* next time you're online we'll talk, okay?

I'm so cute!

wvplayernotreally
Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

4 posted 2002-11-10 07:26 PM

That is seriously some good stuff. You can speak such volumes to people. Its good

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

rimmie
Junior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 45
Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada

5 posted 2002-11-10 07:50 PM

Thank you!!! I'm really glad you liked it because it ment a lot to me and the topic is a serious one. This poem came sraight from my heart so Im glad you enjoyed it.

~RuZ~

[This message has been edited by rimmie (11-11-2002 11:59 AM).]

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