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Out Of My Head
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Out Of My Head |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Sitting here I'm slowly dying, wondering if you've cried over me like i have for you. Sitting here tears are rolling, As I fit pictures of you inside my cluttered head Lying here only wishing, that this would evolve into something Lying here emotions boiling, I will never get you out of my head... (note to cath: this is the one i said i accidently deleted-- it was way better before) "I slipped away |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
"As I fit pictures of you inside my cluttered head" I liked that line, o poetic goddess of depression (Mighty title  )Are you scared? |
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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
I liked this. Yes I did. Good work.  *~erin~* |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
jeez sara man this was awesomez as i already just told you on AIM but anywayz look at this!!!the best smiley ever!!!  "I am who I am who I am who am I?" |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Sara, what's your AIM? Enjoyed this poem... I hate having to try and rebuild something that was accidentally deleted, but you've done a decent job of it. Usually I just give up... lol... Parasite |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
~CHeRiSH~ I liked that line too. ~eRiN~ Did you have to check twice?? Hah-- just joking. ~CaTHY~ I know someone how has a great smile ... and a funny looking nose!! lol Personally- i think this smiley is better...  (i need a hug man!!)~PaRaSiTe~ If u seriously want my AIM thing it's xxsilentdecayxx. but yea- I hate having to retype things too... The two are them are barely alike-- the first one was better Thanks to everyone. Take care, Sara "I slipped away |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
am i the only one that doesnt know how to gt those smilies? LOL "Sitting here I'm slowly dying, wondering if you've cried over me like i have for you." That is my favorite part.YOU are amazing sara!You never write any soecial messages for me on your poems. LOL. Well i`ll ttyl i guess...  |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
this was truley a masterpiece (a prep hahaha, who would've thought)  but anywayz this was realllllllly good i aint gonna ramble this time good poem ~sam~ !respect the alphabet! |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Allison- Here's a note for you... Aaron and I got into a big fight last night.. and i said "oo, i forgot that no one cares about me" and he said "God, you do this to yourself, just because you want everyone to feel bad for you." and i replied with a "i only wish that the was the reason." and he said "OMG, when someone does care about you- you're not gonna know what the hell to do." And he was right. And I cried.  - is that what you wanted? lol.. I little insight on me and my bro's life? lol.. it's depressing- I know. Thanks for ur reply. (ooo yea, i'm gonna eat some chili!! lol)Sam- OMG.. I couldn't help but laugh! He was wearing a white shirt, with a stripe across it- and I haven't seen him wear anything but black in.. forever! I dot mind ur rambling.. In fact- I kinda miss it! Thanks to everyone AGAIN "I slipped away |
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