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Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

0 posted 2002-11-03 01:22 PM

>>-Before-<

If burning waits, I can't relive,
and desperation shreds
like parch-loved throats inside my hands
that crumble when I lead

I need you here like you need me
a stone-and-lily child
I'll bow to hate and tear its knees,
you'll chew my lips and smile.

>-And After-<<

If melting waits, I'll stay for you,
arrest my breath to speak
You'll close your eyes to know my taste,
to heal my cluttered ice

I need you here like you need me
a thick white-daisied love
We'll nod our skin and lord our hope
to thinking it has won.

Denea Furr
Junior Member

since 2002-11-03

Posts 31
Indiana

1 posted 2002-11-03 02:33 PM

BeAuTiFuL

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2002-11-03 06:26 PM

quote:
I'll bow to hate and tear its knees,
you'll chew my lips and smile.

How do you do it Carly? For some odd reason, I want icecream....

Are you scared? BOO! Are you now?

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

3 posted 2002-11-03 06:41 PM

Amazing. Yes, how do you do it? This is wonderful. Good way to go about it.

Laura

Real friends are those who, when you feel you've made a fool of yourself, don't feel you've done a permanent job.

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

4 posted 2002-11-04 01:34 PM

I always love reading your work, Carly. It makes university seem so much easier.

Keep up the confusing work, girl. Rock on.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

5 posted 2002-11-05 05:55 AM

You're going to have to explain this one to me later on MSN lovey. Even with it flyin over my head tho, I still think it's uniquely you.

Stunningly done, as always Carly. Miss you, Wub you.

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

Getting away, isn't Running away.

"The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me."

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