Teen Poetry #6 |
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Racing (not love, not hate... racing) |
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Ricky Junior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 28West Virginia, USA ![]() |
Find a match and pick a place Line 'em up and get ready to race Rev the motor and watch the gauges Slowly move into the stages One hand on wheel and other on shifter Let's make this all the way, not a drifter One foot on brake, one on gas Lights flash down and haul some *** Back into the seat, she revs to 8 Shift now, don't do it late She catches 2nd, the motor whines A little fish-tail, watch those lines The other guy is gone in the mirror You still have an 8th to go and one more gear She revs to 8 again and into 3rd No sounds coming out your mouth, not a word Pass the line and on the brake You've never felt so awake The motor slows and you exhale So scare you are, you're face is pale You're head now feels a ton You just race, and you won Out of your car you walk with a stride Now kiss your girl, you feel so alive Terms you may not know: "drifter": when in racing something goes wrong with your car or you chicken out and let the car drift to the end of the track "she revs to 8": in drag racing it's when the motor of the car revs to 8000 RPM (revolations per minute.. turns).. it's when most racers shift gears "catches 2nd": when you shift into 2nd gear and tires spin a little "still have an 8th to go": a drag race is one quarter mile... an 8th is half of the track or one eighth mile "head now feels a ton": when you win, you get a fat head.. you're very conceited That's how racing is [This message has been edited by Ricky (11-03-2002 12:47 AM).] |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
LoL, Ricky. I didnt need the explanation, but the poem is good. You kno me...The good ol' Chevy girl, likes to race. LoL oh, and theat 'Vette is starting to grow on me... you knew it would...It's a chevy they always do... Luv yas, Tamma Have you ever heard that "No shirt, No shoes" rule? My question is...Why doesn't that rule include pants? |
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Local Parasite![]()
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Ricky, I enjoyed this... you dealt with a very new theme, and noted it in your title... hehe... Seriously though, great work. You wrote this very well... the flow and stanza structure are both extremely well thought through. Nice to have you back. Oh, and thanks for clearing up that terminology at the end. ![]() Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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