Teen Poetry #6 |
Same Way |
foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
I was sorta friends with her. You were more than that. I saw the way you danced with her Saw the way you sat. She sat beside you Your arm around her waist. And in her mouth Your kisses she could taste. You didn't know I liked you. You were just a "good ol' friend". Still I didn't want that friendship to have to come to an end. But you broke my heart. That's all there is to say. You broke my heart. Never again will I feel the same way. |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Sad write... :'( It sucks to watch that stuff... a lot. I don't know what to say, man... I liked it, tho... a lot. ( ) "i told you i'd never say goodbye . now i'm slipping on the tears you made me cry but that's what i get" |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
hey, liked this one gonna keep this reply short cuz i tend to write a book(lol) and it aint even bout the poem so good write ~sam~ |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
thankz guyz you r the lucky two to be the first to reply j/j thankz tho and yes sara this is "bean stalk" |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Good one.I am sad right now. I dont know why.Anyway......... *Allison* |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
I agree with the person who said that this was sad. Nicely written though...thanks for sharing Are you scared? BOO! Are you now? |
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