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Do You Remember
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Do You Remember |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
does she still... remember me does she still remember how it used to be childish flirting picking on one another to childish to take are emotions out from under the cover now older and wiser childishness long put away but my child cam back to me when I saw her that day good thoughts room long ago as she played with my hair talking of old times, and laughing as we where sitting where my cares had left me I have no thought of my home there are no more worries of always being alone all the stress just drifted from me as I paid no attention and just let things be her soft delicate hand in my hair caressing my head I’ve only had this feeling once before this nirvana, as if I where dead I can still remember that day the thoughts linger in my mind I’m wondering if this maybe this is something I wanted to find when you live you begin to die |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
I really liked this one, very full of emotion, and I can also relate to what you are saying. Definately a great job! |
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