How Much Love Is Inside Of Me

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iMMuNe
Junior Member

since 2002-07-23

Posts 49
Maine, USA

0 posted 2003-09-05 07:45 PM

Meaning the world to me,
Is something you should be proud to be.
Knowing that I'm here for you is something not many see,
Spending money on you is something I like to do,
Because baby girl no one has dont it as much as I have for you.

I look at myself every single damn day,
Thinking of things we can do in each different way,
Every minute of my life seems to wish you was here,
So if you was upset baby,
I can whipe away them tears.

You say you haven't cried in a few years,
Girl - I'm glad,
But have you ever cried because you was happy?..
Not because you were sad?

Everytime I see you I get this way,
Everytime I feel or touch your gorgeous face,
Every word or smile it seems to shine through,
The darkness that had erupted before I met you.

This seems to not be a poem but a moment of truth,
Where I am admitting everything to you,
Like my feelings and emotions that run through me,
But I'm glad now I know that you can somewhat see...

How much love, is inside of Me.

(Note): This poem was written to my girlfriend a month back, when all I had was her.

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

1 posted 2003-09-06 09:32 AM

awww this poem was amazing, I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

2 posted 2003-09-06 01:52 PM

This was the sweetest thing EVER! LOL. I haven't met many guys who feel this deeply about someone, and I'm glad there's more out there although it's hard to believe. Great work and you better show this to your girlfriend! ~Jess

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

Alnilam
Member

since 2003-07-04

Posts 75

3 posted 2003-09-06 05:14 PM

this is a really beautiful poem. beautiful in the way its written and what it means to you and what it displays to the reader. thank you for the read

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."

cuda04
Junior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 46
Wisconsin,USA

4 posted 2003-09-06 05:49 PM

this is great--the incorrect use of the language bothered me at first, but as I continued to read I realized that it only added to the character of the poem as a whole.

Always look forward, never look back, dreams are much more refreshing than regrets.

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