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yankees01rugby
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since 2003-08-13
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0 posted 2003-09-05 06:27 PM



You like a guy for years
You’re scared to tell him
You don’t want him to not talk to you again
You want to stay friends

Your friend tells you
“I like him; I want to go out with him”
What do you say?
She asks you to ask him for her

He doesn’t like her
You are very glad
It’s your chance to say something to him
You’re to scared to say anything

You finally get the courage
You care if he likes you
But don’t care if he says anything
You just need to tell him

You see him in the hall
You walk with him and talk
Finally you tell him
And the unexpected happens

In the middle of your sentence
He starts walking away
He has a strange look on his face
What does it mean?

He doesn’t tell you anything
He doesn’t find you later to talk to you
It’s like he doesn’t care
Does he?

How long do you wait?
As long as it takes
You want to be with him
No matter how long it takes

Love is like quicksand, the deeper you fall the harder it is to get out

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brezee
Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140

1 posted 2003-09-05 07:24 PM


wow, i was kinda hoping that it would end up with you going out with him but.....well i guess that would stink, i can sorta relate to this in that, im waitin for a guy to come around too and he's as close as you can get w/o being a b/f but,i've also learned that  even if you dont get that guy the way you want, he can be a really awesome and special friend, by the way, good write   

~*~*brezee*~*~

Alnilam
Member
since 2003-07-04
Posts 75

2 posted 2003-09-06 05:16 PM


WoW i really really enjoyed reading this, anticipating the end. Im in this sort of tango with a guy too and it was really nice to read this. Thank you for the great read
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