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Eternity(repost)

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

0 posted 2003-09-05 05:16 PM

Now is the time, here is the place.
I gave you my heart, my mind, and my soul,
Now I give you the rest of me;
The ultimate expression of love.
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Our love runs deep,
Flowing like the blood in our veins.
Our hearts are one and the same,
Beating together with the union of our love.
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Your hands, wound in my hair,
Your eyes, getting lost in mine,
Your lips, taunting me, teasing me,
Leading me into erotic bliss.
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We're free to love as we please,
Together our love is unbridled.
The anticipation grows stronger, the end coming near;
The hill is no longer a mountain.
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Finally we reach the top,
a thousand fireworks going off at once.
It's so powerful, so moving.
It's like a volcano blowing its top.
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But when the explosions are done
And movement has subsided,
We lay together, calm and serene,
Wanting only Eternity.

"To handle yourself, use your head; to handle others, use your heart." -Donald Laird

[This message has been edited by BrokenDreams (09-07-2003 09:59 AM).]

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2003-09-05 06:06 PM

Good work! This was GREAT! The imagery I saw in my mind near the end was...indescribable. Thanks for the read! ~Jess

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

dizzyblondeme
Junior Member

since 2003-08-27

Posts 11
NE, England

2 posted 2003-09-07 10:46 AM

This is great. Really good. Its metaphors for the growth of love are amazing and again, great imagery!

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