The Brother I Always Wanted

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Teen Poetry #6

The Brother I Always Wanted

Manth88
Junior Member

since 2003-06-15

Posts 45
IL, USA

0 posted 2003-09-04 07:06 PM

Who do I look up to? You ask.
Meanwhile I hide behind this mask.
If you really wanna know who!
Deep down, honest to god, it is you.
It's not my fault I have no other.
Man it would be totally cool,
If you were my older brother.
Then I wouldn't have to act like a fool.
When I am around you, I feel loved,
Then when I am not around you, I need a hug.
Your the closest bro i'll ever have.
I want it to stay like that.
And that is the fact.

[This message has been edited by Manth88 (09-04-2003 07:08 PM).]

brezee
Member

since 2003-06-02

Posts 140

1 posted 2003-09-04 07:57 PM

Hey sammy wammy, nice job, i think you're gettin better and things will come easier from here on out, well keep up the good werk, and i can relate to this lol

again nice write,

~*~*brezee*~*~

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

2 posted 2003-09-04 10:48 PM

this poem really made me smile, reminded me of someone I know. Thanks so much for sharing, great job!

yankees01rugby
Junior Member

since 2003-08-13

Posts 48
USA

3 posted 2003-09-05 04:46 PM

this reminds me of someone i know that just moved away. nice job!

Love is like quicksand, the deeper you fall the harder it is to get out

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

4 posted 2003-09-07 04:26 PM

wonderful sammy! keep up the good work, i like how you ended it!

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