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Teen Poetry #6

Cut Me Loose

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-09-02 05:30 PM

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Against the past,
I use my strength to carry on.
I will continue to walk alone,
Until all this pain is GONE.
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The inner side,
The weaker side of me.
The side that I never,
NEVER let anyone see.
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Behind the wasted parts of me,
The parts that just cause me pain.
I want to be the one in control,
The one that cuts the CHAIN.

I hate everything about you!
Why do I love you?
You hate everything about me!
Why do you love me?~3 Days Grace

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (09-02-2003 05:33 PM).]

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2003-09-02 08:59 PM

GREAT WRITE! This is VERY inspirational! I'm glad to hear those words coming from you! Good work! ~Jess

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

2 posted 2003-09-07 06:33 PM

Oooo. I really liked this one. Nice job. Loves.

"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..."

BrokenAngel
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA

3 posted 2003-09-07 11:39 PM

I'm really getting into your work...your style is wonderful and the way you word things...great write!! I mean, I can't say much else but that. Keep it up!!

Read my work and read my thoughts
I'll go back into the night now
---Night Angel

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