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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2003-09-03 02:33 AM



Ten minutes seemed like an eternity.
We were still strangers. All the same,
I loved you ardently and fervently.
I never even knew your name.

When music stopped, we kept on dancing.
You went as quickly as you came.
You took my breath with you and gasping,
I never even asked your name.

© Copyright 2003 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
BrokenAngel
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since 2002-01-06
Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA
1 posted 2003-09-03 01:31 PM


Short but very expresive.  I only have one question, why didn't you ask her name?  Great write!!

Read my work and read my thoughts
I'll go back into the night now
---Night Angel

RennieandBoo
Junior Member
since 2003-09-02
Posts 47
Florida!
2 posted 2003-09-03 04:11 PM


Yeah! why didn't ya bud? lol THATS A GREAT ONE!
Lexy
Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
3 posted 2003-09-04 10:15 AM


good poem. too swept up in the moment to think of importance. I liked this.
~Lex

blueyedlioness
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 289
USA
4 posted 2003-09-04 01:32 PM


You know I'm in love with your poetry... it makes the world seem real.
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