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Teen Poetry #6

Stranger

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2003-09-03 02:33 AM

Ten minutes seemed like an eternity.
We were still strangers. All the same,
I loved you ardently and fervently.
I never even knew your name.

When music stopped, we kept on dancing.
You went as quickly as you came.
You took my breath with you and gasping,
I never even asked your name.

BrokenAngel
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA

1 posted 2003-09-03 01:31 PM

Short but very expresive. I only have one question, why didn't you ask her name? Great write!!

Read my work and read my thoughts
I'll go back into the night now
---Night Angel

RennieandBoo
Junior Member

since 2003-09-02

Posts 47
Florida!

2 posted 2003-09-03 04:11 PM

Yeah! why didn't ya bud? lol THATS A GREAT ONE!

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

3 posted 2003-09-04 10:15 AM

good poem. too swept up in the moment to think of importance. I liked this.
~Lex

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

4 posted 2003-09-04 01:32 PM

You know I'm in love with your poetry... it makes the world seem real.

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