Teen Poetry #6 |
Still Haunting Me |
BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
I wish you'd stop invading my mind! Changing my decisions, Altering my feelings, Your presence is driving me mad! This power that you have over me... You control every move that I make. I can't do anything without a thought of you And it just won't go away! I recollect the times you held me tightly And how your voice could calm me instantly, As I feel I may go insane. Your sparkling eyes have scarred my memories, Never allowing me to move on. The funniest part of it all... You'll never fully understand how you've impacted me.* "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." [This message has been edited by BabieDoll (09-02-2003 06:30 PM).] |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
I love this. I usually get the chance to read all of your poetry before you post it...but I enjoy it just as much when I read it on here. Nice job. Loves. "I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..." |
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BrokenAngel Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 141Puryear, TN, USA |
I can relate to this one. I have an ex that has done this to me, it sucks don't it? Anyways, great write!! Read my work and read my thoughts |
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dizzyblondeme Junior Member
since 2003-08-27
Posts 11NE, England |
Great. Just great. I can understand everything in this poem - unfortuantly Really well done! XxXx J xXxX |
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