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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-08-28 06:42 AM



So this is it eh?
This is the FINAL arguement.
The final INSULT.
Well I'm sorry you
Must feel that WAY.
You will be missed.
But no longer can I dwell,
on what used to be...in the PAST.
It only saddnes me,
DRAGS me down,
and puts me behind.
So I guess this is it,
the LAST TIME I give you,
the final
         ...GOODBYE...


I hate everything about you!
Why do I love you?
You hate everything about me!
Why do you love me?~3 Days Grace

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (08-28-2003 06:42 AM).]

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SilentTears
Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
1 posted 2003-08-28 06:52 AM


Wow Stac...I like this. Heh...really hit home. Love's.

"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..."

BabieDoll
Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268
BFE
2 posted 2003-08-28 04:13 PM


Stac, I LOVED this poem! And by what we talked about at lunch today, I think I know who it's about...and I can sadly say that I relate. I honestly *hate* saying that, but it's true. You did an excellent job of portraying your emotions in a simple piece. GREAT job!

Love ya!

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

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