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Pollita
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since 2002-07-25
Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

0 posted 2003-08-27 07:56 PM



You used to be my everything,
You could do no wrong.
I’d never imagine you’d hurt me,
Yet, some how I had been mistaken.

My heart used to race,
Just as soon as I saw you.
The way you’d always be there for me,
Now…It seems that all changed.

We’re completely different people,
I grew up…
You changed as well,
Your heart just disappeared.

I used to want to be with you,
For the rest of my life.
I now know,
How foolish I was and how good it is,
That we’ve now said goodbye.

* A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey *

© Copyright 2003 Delaniie Quirk - All Rights Reserved
magic_612
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since 2003-07-31
Posts 190
NB, Canada
1 posted 2003-08-27 10:59 PM


very good read, definately full of emotion. Good job
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