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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-08-25 11:40 AM


A gentle voice
Sounding from a distance.
A voice I’ve missed
For to long it seems.
Wishing once again,
I could hear it clearly.
It’s haunting my dreams,
Like clockwork now.
Carried by the wind,
It slowly reaches my ears.
It taunts me,
It’s like trying to catch a ghost.
I want to hear it say,
“I still love you.”
I want to hear it slowly whisper,
“Be mine, once again.”


"It's the way that he makes you feel.
It's the way that he kisses you.
It's the way that he makes you fall in love"~Sugarcult

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (08-27-2003 08:42 PM).]

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peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
1 posted 2003-08-26 09:00 PM


Awww....JEEZ! This about made me cry. I know the feeling all too well, as you do. This one is goin' in my library. Good work! ~Jess

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

dizzyblondeme
Junior Member
since 2003-08-27
Posts 11
NE, England
2 posted 2003-08-27 06:30 PM


I'm new here and this is one of the first poems I've read, but out of the ones I have read, yours really has touched me the most.

Its such an intimate feeling in lost love and yet it is expressed in such a way that it reaches out and can almost touch any one in a such a personal way.

Well Done!

Spine Grinder
Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
3 posted 2003-08-27 08:44 PM


Thanks you two. I'm glad this touched you so dearly, I was aiming for the more intimate subject, and I guess it worked out for me...

I hate everything about you!
Why do I love you?
You hate everything about me!
Why do you love me?~3 Days Grace

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