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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-08-26 07:12 PM



Laughter around every corner,
And smiles everywhere.
This has to be love,
I can feel it in the air.
I know you don’t
want to be alone,
But, like George Thorogood said,
“I’m bad to the bone.”
So either you like it,
Or you don’t.
I can’t wait forever,
And you know that I won’t.
So make up your mind,
Tell me what you think.
I won’t hesitate to leave,
Not even a blink,
If you don’t like-
What you see,
You gotta let me know,
And I’ll let you be…


"It's the way that he makes you feel.
It's the way that he kisses you.
It's the way that he makes you fall in love"~Sugarcult

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peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
1 posted 2003-08-26 09:03 PM


Oooooo yesh yesh, it's a keeper! I like this one. Good work! ~Jess

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

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