Why is it so hard to look back?

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Teen Poetry #6

Why is it so hard to look back?

Suede
Junior Member

since 2003-08-25

Posts 38
Drifting on the soul

0 posted 2003-08-26 08:20 AM

Just so innocent with age
15, could I have been in love?
Look to the ground
is the answer above?

Locked emotions released without care
shallow to a passion so deep
The emptiness of days gone by
Nights lost without sleep

Did I really let her walk away
when it was there to be seen
I could almost touch it
so does that mean

Was I in love?
How can I understand this
Looking back hurts
as I recall her kiss

She is gone for now
a memory like the four seasons
Oh how I wish to find her heart
to search for the reasons

Why is it so hard to look back
if I was not in love
Set adrift on memory bliss
take me to the above

[This message has been edited by Suede (08-26-2003 08:21 AM).]

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

1 posted 2003-08-26 08:27 AM

this was nice...
but when your in love you know it, it feels right and you havent even got to ask yourself if it was or is love...
keep up the good poems..

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SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

2 posted 2003-08-26 05:34 PM

OOOO. I liked this. I really liked the vocab. used in this poem. Very nice! Flowed very nice. Beautiful. Nice work. Going in my library.

"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..."

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