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Dustin462 Junior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 23Selah, WA |
Why have you done this? What did they do? You were their father You showed them Scooby-Doo They used to love, and they still do But how could you crush a love so pure and so true Your wife treated you as you were king You didn't care. All you did was wear the ring. I look at you as a cruel mind So dark you can't imagine to find You tell them you have no love for them You just want some fun So go back to that bimbo where your (edited by Moderator) fun is done Get out of their lives before you do more damage Eventhough all the damage has been done Your son shows no emotion , he just sits and mopes Your daughter says doesn't care, but you can still see in her eyes that last bit of hope Your wife, stressed, through all the pain Trying to keep her family from falling down the drain Maybe ONE day you will understand But why can't you understand now? [This message has been edited by Masked Intruder (08-25-2003 03:24 PM).] |
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poetik_punk New Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 8 |
lots of emotion in that one it was good I'll say |
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Dustin462 Junior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 23Selah, WA |
Sorry about the language, I'm still new here and I wasn't sure what to do. |
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Halcyon Junior Member
since 2003-04-10
Posts 43Arizona, USA |
Oh wow, such strong feelings. You must really care what's happening with the family. I hope the best for them.. |
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