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words in the night
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words in the night |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
The light shines down long and hard. When will it come to a close? When will the rays stop dancing upon me.. tempting me to be radiant. I want a winter grey to match this numb state I've walked into. I'm browsing through the days, deciding when and where to smile. I'll wait for the night. For my conversations with the stars. We'll smile with muted brightness, and exchange a knowing glance. I'll walk beneath the shadows and whisper my fears into the sky. My words will form a layer of density around this darkness. But no one takes note. For they've long gone to rest. [This message has been edited by Lexy (08-05-2003 08:00 PM).] |
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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time |
Oh my, I do love the mysterious air that this poem contains...so haunting. It makes me feel and savor each word, the overall sense being wonderful. Great job! 'Tis quite a beautiful write.  For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch, |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
WOW lexy i really enjoyed this. great feeling in this write. "I'll walk beneath the shadows and whisper my fears into the sky" Intresting Tequilia |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Wow! I really enjoyed this. As I do all of your work! This was a very beautiful poem. It flowed so perfectly. Nice write!"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..." |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
ohlala, great write "There never was a genius without a tincture of madness." |
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