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Alyssa
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0 posted 2003-08-12 04:45 PM



You are the mother i received
the day i met your son
and i just want to thank you mom
for all the things you've done

Youve given to me a gracious man
with whom i share my life
you are his loving mother
and i his lucky 'wife'

you used to pat his little head
and now i hold his hand
you raised in love a little boy
and gave to me a man...


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© Copyright 2003 Amèe - All Rights Reserved
Lexy
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1 posted 2003-08-12 05:33 PM


awwww..this was so sweet.

Tequilia_Sunrise
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2 posted 2003-08-12 06:11 PM


very beautifull! he is a lucky man to have you. sounds like his mother did a good job

Tequilia

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3 posted 2003-08-22 05:05 AM


Congrats babe.  Nice write.  Email me.

ex animo,
Aaron Woodside

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magic_612
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4 posted 2003-08-22 10:06 AM


awwww I love this one! great job
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5 posted 2003-08-22 10:14 AM


This was really cute. I'm just wondering, have you or will you show this to her? Cuz I'm sure she would love to hear something like that. Nice write.

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6 posted 2003-08-23 12:34 PM


THATS BEAUTIFUL! i really liked it. I don't have any construstive critisism. I don't know, i loved the rhyme sceme and the rhythm. nice write! ~ Amanda
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7 posted 2003-08-23 05:48 PM


Amèe~
This is so very sweet ... she's getting a great daughter-in-law, I'll betcha'~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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8 posted 2003-08-25 02:51 PM


congrats and best of luck...good write too

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Alyssa
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9 posted 2003-08-26 08:25 AM


thanks guys, yea i showed her, she almost cried..

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