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Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

0 posted 2003-08-12 04:45 PM

You are the mother i received
the day i met your son
and i just want to thank you mom
for all the things you've done

Youve given to me a gracious man
with whom i share my life
you are his loving mother
and i his lucky 'wife'

you used to pat his little head
and now i hold his hand
you raised in love a little boy
and gave to me a man...

**
'----'

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-08-12 05:33 PM

awwww..this was so sweet.

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2003-08-12 06:11 PM

very beautifull! he is a lucky man to have you. sounds like his mother did a good job

Tequilia

aaron woodside
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

3 posted 2003-08-22 05:05 AM

Congrats babe. Nice write. Email me.

ex animo,
Aaron Woodside

IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

4 posted 2003-08-22 10:06 AM

awwww I love this one! great job

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

5 posted 2003-08-22 10:14 AM

This was really cute. I'm just wondering, have you or will you show this to her? Cuz I'm sure she would love to hear something like that. Nice write.

"To handle yourself, use your head; to handle others, use your heart." -Donald Laird

sixington
Member

since 2003-07-14

Posts 53
Utah

6 posted 2003-08-23 12:34 PM

THATS BEAUTIFUL! i really liked it. I don't have any construstive critisism. I don't know, i loved the rhyme sceme and the rhythm. nice write! ~ Amanda

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2003-08-23 05:48 PM

Amèe~
This is so very sweet ... she's getting a great daughter-in-law, I'll betcha'~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

8 posted 2003-08-25 02:51 PM

congrats and best of luck...good write too

"There never was a genius without a tincture of madness."

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

9 posted 2003-08-26 08:25 AM

thanks guys, yea i showed her, she almost cried..

If I could offer you only one tip for the future, sunscreen would be it.

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