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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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this is to a guy, what else is new. i know its not good, and i rhyming  is a scary scary thing. so bear with me as i sort this stuff through.since every one has left i feel so closed up all through yet every time i glace around reminds me more of you then i think back to times when your smile greeted me and it gives me strength to look into a mirror and then i see a new light simply glowing around my eyes now sparkling bright i'll never forget the look you gave me as the sun went to twlight never will i forget how that now and then we would smile as we started out as never more than friends but your smile was addicting words always true that's why at night i blow a kiss sending it straight to you with love on the wing i can only see you'll never know how much you mean to me * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
WHAT??? I REPLYED TO THIS. where is it? I said that it was BLUE  insanity is not a crime |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
awww. Well this was cute, I actually enjoyed it. Great poem Riley. ~Lex |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
I agree with Lexy.. good job  |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
very good write "There never was a genius without a tincture of madness." |
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