Teen Poetry #6 |
Sleepy Thoughts |
Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Leaves falling, Once again, As autumn, Slowly approaches. The animals begin, To gather their goods, So they can face, The perils of winter. The flowers begin, To wilt, Beautiful once, Now dying again. The sad thing is, I’m just beginning, To come full bloom. "It's the way that he makes you feel. |
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since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
the first one I read this morning and I'm glad that it was. I enjoyed this, it was nothing mind blowing or profound, it was beautifully simple, yet still captures a meaning lovely imagery and power. Nice work I really like this one of yours! ~Live and Laugh~ The problem with resisting temptation is you never know if you'll get the chance again |
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