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Teen Poetry #6
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lovergirl
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since 2003-08-18
Posts 12
0 posted 2003-08-20 04:43 PM

If I can change this world around,
Then this whole world would be up-side-down.
All I want is peace and love,
But that is anly in the heavens above.
This world is full of fury and hate.
Most people can't even find a good mate.
I need a place for people like me.
So people can see exactly what I see.
If I can change this world around,
Then this whole world would be up-side-down.
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magic_612
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since 2003-07-31
Posts 190
NB, Canada
1 posted 2003-08-20 10:22 PM

hey I really like this one, and I totally agree. This world sucks most of the time.. hope to read more of your work.
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