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BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

0 posted 2003-08-19 05:17 PM

My mind is racing furiously,
Angered at myself for what I have done.
Yet my heart still tells me,
With the utmost confindence,
That I have made the right choice.

Memories flood my subconscience mind
Like a picture show that refuses to end,
Conjuring up all the reasons why
I hurt so badly for my decision
But still, I allow it to go on.

My head knew before my heart did
That the life I led was untrue to myself.
It's funny how just one incident
Can completely change your path.

...I'm still debating if this is the right one...*

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

[This message has been edited by BabieDoll (08-19-2003 05:18 PM).]

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2003-08-19 06:00 PM

Awww hun, this was great! I am puttin' this one in my library! ~Jess

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

2 posted 2003-08-19 08:36 PM

I liked this Jenn. Very descriptive, good job.

"Is there anyone out there cause it's getting harder and harder to breathe"~Maroon 5~

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

3 posted 2003-08-20 09:35 AM

This one is great! it's a perfect message.. so very true. One incident has happened to me, and now the plans I had for University has totally gone out the window, and I now have the chance to travel, what to do... what to do. Thanks and keep up the great work

lovergirl
Junior Member

since 2003-08-18

Posts 12

4 posted 2003-08-20 04:54 PM

That poem was lovely. It touched my heart. All I've got to say is think with both your mind and heart together. And let the ones you love help you.

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

5 posted 2003-08-20 08:06 PM

I liked this one. Very expressive. Nice job. Love's.

"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..."

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