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eternalblu Junior Member
since 2003-08-17
Posts 11Pennsylvania, US |
Concentration Sleepless nights Constant headaches Wrongs not rights What is this familiar tune That plays in my mind As I watch the rising of the moon And know I am confined My pain shows no limits Even though I have no room No space to grow stronger roots I am just meant for doom I take abuse constantly It happens day to day I have tried to wait patiently But I am being led astray People think I've gone crazy The doctor says so too They put me on more pills today But I refuse to take more than two Beaten, scorned, wished away Disowned by loved ones Some people have pity and pray But most wish I?d die and be done I fear for my state of mind As I wander down this path The pain is so bad I am now blind I have reached the end of pain?s wrath I?m sorry for the pain I've caused When I went through my own But now it?s over and I am gone And I watch as no one mourns It's easier to run |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
This is a VERY good poem. I can relate, not completely, but all too well. This is one of the few poems that I have read that made sense with a rhyme. Great first post! ~J.Lynn  "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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eternalblu Junior Member
since 2003-08-17
Posts 11Pennsylvania, US |
Thank you so much!  When I first saw that I had a reply I was nervous about reading it but now I feel a lot better about posting. Thanks!It's easier to run |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I really really REALLY liked this, I can also relate, not entirely, but mostly, and this was a very good first post. I also like your signature, thats one of my favorite songs, nice choice. "Is there anyone out there cause it's getting harder and harder to breathe"~Maroon 5~ |
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eternalblu Junior Member
since 2003-08-17
Posts 11Pennsylvania, US |
Wow you guys are really nice here! Thanks a lot, and I like Harder to Breathe by Maroon 5 also It's easier to run |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
I guess this is getting kind of repetative by now, but I have to say it to, LoL, I can relate to it for the most part, but not completely. Good write, and htanks for the read. "To handle yourself, use your head;yo handle others, use your heart." -Donald Laird |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
I very much enjoyed this. Sometimes, I think everyone feels they can relate. This was very depressing...and it rang all too true. But trust me, there's always someone who would miss you!  By the way...great first post! It's going in my library! Keep 'em comin'! "I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..." |
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eternalblu Junior Member
since 2003-08-17
Posts 11Pennsylvania, US |
Thanks everyone! And don't worry silent tears, when I get a chance I'll post more. I have at least 30 poems that I've written. I have much of that creative juice flowin |
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