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Teen Poetry #6

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DarkPoetess
New Member

since 2003-08-18

Posts 9
PA, USA

0 posted 2003-08-19 09:09 PM

Jealous losers walking by,
Heads cast down from the blue sky,
Clutching books and pens and things,
While I wear my diamond rings,
Watch them walk away in fear,
As I laugh at them and sneer,
Can't they see what they are like,
I just wish they'd take a hike.

Pretty girls with perfect faces,
Always seen in the right places,
They aren't smart, and aren't dumb,
Yet they hate me when they come,
How I wish that they would go,
And leave me all alone,
I could finally dry my eyes,
And take of this old disguise.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

1 posted 2003-08-19 10:18 PM

I really like this alot! Good job and thanks for the read.

"It's the way that he makes you feel.
It's the way that he kisses you.
It's the way that he makes you fall in love"~Sugarcult

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

2 posted 2003-08-20 09:41 AM

Great poem.. I liked this one a lot

DarkPoetess
New Member

since 2003-08-18

Posts 9
PA, USA

3 posted 2003-08-20 11:09 AM

Hi, Thanks for your replies! I appreciate them! ~DarkPoetess

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