Teen Poetry #6 |
I'm Human Too |
lovergirl Junior Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 12 |
I look at you. You look at me. You should see exactly what I see. So why don't you treat me like what you're seeing? Why don't you treat me like a human being? You can't see how much I'm hurt. You can't see the hole that you've burnt. You've burnt a hole deep down in my heart. We don't have to be so far apart. If you could see how I feel inside, Then maybe, just maybe, you'll see how I survive. |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Hello and welcome to Piptalk! I'm sure you'll like it here! This poem was a good choice for your first post! I espically liked the last few lines. Good work! ~Jess "At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato |
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TigerZ Member
since 2002-01-02
Posts 83Ontario, Canada |
Hey and welcome to PipTalk! Thx for the great read. I could really relate and it hit home for me. Keep posting! A life without loveā¦is no life at all. |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
Welcome to Passions! This was an awesome first post. You expressed your feelings well. I could really relate. I hope to see more from you. -Jen |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
Welcome to piptalk! very good poem.. hope to see more of your work Ashley *When you were born you were the one crying when everyone else was smiling, Live your like so that when you die you are the one smiling when everyone |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Welcome to Piptalk! This was a good first post, you don't have to restrict yourself to only rhyming poems, but if thats what you like, then keep it up the nice work. "It's the way that he makes you feel. It's the way that he kisses you. It's the way that he makes you fall in love"~Sugarcult [This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (08-20-2003 11:31 AM).] |
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