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Teen Poetry #6

leave my shore

collarbone_girl
Junior Member

since 2003-07-14

Posts 45
Wonderland

0 posted 2003-08-11 11:07 AM

she stands an age away gently brushing her hair

you'll never get far enough away

you can never leave your cares and memories
far behind to see the new moon rising
without tears of yesterdays sunset
blocking your view

and although the days will fly by
you'll always return to the last thought you had about her
and you'll see yet another page of your heart fallen to the ground
as you gently set it one fire with
the used up passion of the past

so let the birds fly past you in the evening rain
that will scatter like icing
and fall inbetween your toes
and try to forget your ambition to be something
because of who you were
and your inability to forget the by gones
your going to be stuck
in your world of last week, month, year
for the next yesterday forever.

This Cool Night Air Is Curious...

wvplayernotreally
Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

1 posted 2003-08-11 09:22 PM

I liked this alot. Great write wonderful read

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2003-08-12 05:40 PM

wow...beautiful as always. The last stanza really made this for me. I read it over three times.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

3 posted 2003-08-19 11:00 PM

Wow...I liked this, especially the last two lines. Good job.

"It's the way that he makes you feel.
It's the way that he kisses you.
It's the way that he makes you fall in love"~Sugarcult

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