Teen Poetry #6 |
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Anger, Pain, and You |
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Lindsay Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 59South Dakota |
Anger, bottled up inside of me Anger, waiting to be released Anger that is caused by pain Pain, haunting me Pain, that won’t go away Pain that is caused by you You, I was better off without You, Just leave me alone You caused all my suffering and misery |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
This is a well written, painfully truthful piece of writing, and yes sweety, you are better off without that individual! *hugs* hope you feel better soon! And In some ways it relates to me about one person, and in other ways it relates to me about another person, thank you for the great read! * A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey * |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Great poem! This poem pretty much has layed my past right in front me. Good work and thanks for the read! ~Jess ![]() "At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato |
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Krystin18 Junior Member
since 2003-01-19
Posts 20Ontario, Canada |
very simple and right to the point. i liek it Put me on display as teh girl that you tore apart piece by piece and forgot to put back together. |
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