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Teen Poetry #6

Anger, Pain, and You

Lindsay
Member

since 2003-03-26

Posts 59
South Dakota

0 posted 2003-08-18 11:40 PM

Anger, bottled up inside of me
Anger, waiting to be released
Anger that is caused by pain

Pain, haunting me
Pain, that won’t go away
Pain that is caused by you

You, I was better off without
You, Just leave me alone
You caused all my suffering and misery

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

1 posted 2003-08-18 11:53 PM

This is a well written, painfully truthful piece of writing, and yes sweety, you are better off without that individual!
*hugs* hope you feel better soon! And In some ways it relates to me about one person, and in other ways it relates to me about another person, thank you for the great read!

* A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey *

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

2 posted 2003-08-19 01:43 PM

Great poem! This poem pretty much has layed my past right in front me. Good work and thanks for the read! ~Jess

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

Krystin18
Junior Member

since 2003-01-19

Posts 20
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2003-08-24 12:50 PM

very simple and right to the point. i liek it

Put me on display as teh girl that you tore apart piece by piece and forgot to put back together.

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