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The Wound
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The Wound |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
"The Wound" (24/8/03) Pain like needle rain, no comfort or shelter in this place. Shame runs through my vains, black shadow's covering my sad face. "Wrong" tears drip from my old jar of "Taking Forgranted". A blood trace taints the wall where mem'ries hung in my head. OLD SCHROLLS WITH PROPHESIES, FORGOTTEN HANDWRITING, DUSTY HEART TRYNA BREATHE, EMOTIONS ARE FIGHTING. THE WOUND IS FILLED WITH SALT, BLAME, LOSING. IT'S YOUR FAULT. ARROWS OF DARKNESS BITE, SENTIMENT'S HAUNTING ME, THIS WOLRD SEEMS BLACK AND WHITE, NO REASON LEFT TO BE. THE WOUND KEEPS KEEPING ON, SUFFERING HAS BEEN BORN... Fear is creeping near, an unknown hand upon my shoulder. Stones cracking my bones, banned demon vision's getting bolder. Enemy fortresse's assulting my heart and soul. The battlefield's shaking, casualtie's scaed to unfold. Chorus A speechless storm of "thoughts" blowing, Down the grey coast of "Hurts" growing. The road begins to shatter, sadness begins to gather, Just waiting to attack my sore spot. Recklessness has arrived in town, "I Don't Care's" kicks my while I'm down. Cruel crashing waves coming soon, "Miss You" feels like a monsoom, Thinking back when I used to have lot's... Chorus |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
This is REALLY nice. So unique..I couldn't help but wonder what the music, and melody sounded like. Great song, its so creative. ~Lex |
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