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Master
Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2003-08-18 04:16 PM



The city fell silent –
                No electricity!
An outage of power –
                How outrageously gorgeous!
From offices, restaurants,
                Doorsteps and porches,
Suit-and-tie workers
                All bathed in simplicity.

Impassioned and mischievous,
                You blew out the candles.
Alone, in the darkness,
                We kissed one another.
And hiding, like children,
                So carefree and careless,
We searched for each other
                Under the covers.

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blueyedlioness
Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289
USA
1 posted 2003-08-19 05:41 PM


*sigh* I'm still addicted to your poetry. Yet again you outdo yourself in a completely DIFFERENT perfect rhythm. Keep posting, dude... you're an inspiration to the unpublished masses. *goes to read it again*

-Lioness

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