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morgansmiles Junior Member
since 2003-06-11
Posts 25hicksville |
(I know i have posted this before...but i really wanted to know what people think about it.) 12:40 its getting late I wish sleeping was an easy release But the pull you have on me Keeps me thinking, thinking of you Don’t I wish that I could just tell you But my lips are sealed and cold My mind is full of dreams And only dreams For you are out of reach My hands are numb and lonely What comfort would become of them with one touch But dreams are almost supernatural Existing only in our minds and wishes Wishes never come true I have tried only a thousand times Each time held a secret My only truth of which no one will ever know But time is punishing and painful The longer these truths are never spoken The longer my lips will be cold If you arent happy, then just laugh...people wont know why and the look on thier faces is sure to make you happy! |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
The last two lines made this poem for me. Good job with this. I know how that is, being up late just thinking..about that person that you wish to tell the truth. Believe me when you do finially tell them your lips are practically on fire. lol..  [This message has been edited by Lexy (08-16-2003 09:26 PM).] |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
This was SO...indescribable! I felt this the WHOLE way through and it really hit home for me. This was an amazing write and I'm glad you posted it again! ~Jess  *Another one for my library!* "At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
Don’t I wish that I could just tell you But my lips are sealed and cold man, those lines are funkin awesome! good stuff. -bergundy- no one can make you feel inferior, unless you let them.--eleanor roosevelt |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Oh my. This poem was beautiful. I really enjoyed this. I agree with Peaches...I felt it the whole way through. Nice write!  "I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..." |
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