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Teen Poetry #6

I like cheese

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-08-14 03:44 PM

I her someone complaining the other day that poets dont write enough about chees, so i thought i'd give it a try!
I like cheese

Why is it yellow?
Why does it stink?
Why does it stop me up?
like a old rusty sink?

If It is warm then may I go?
because I cant eat,
not one crumb more!

I like cheese,
yes that is true,
but did you know,
that it don't like you?

If you were a cow
and people bothered you,
Think of how
you would be too!

So we like cheese,
good on most,
good on bread,
even on some toast!
I hope you liked my cheesie poem! he he he

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-14 04:37 PM

I like cheese, too.. I eat it.

Damn lactose intolerance, though!

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

2 posted 2003-08-15 10:43 AM

cute

I like cheese too.

This really was a nice little poem. It was kinda cool to get away from all the normal poems about lost loves and not being understood. Good job.

-Jen

"One's philosophy is not best expressed in words; it's expressed in the choices on makes." -Eleanor Roosevelt

BigFlamingClyde
New Member

since 2003-08-14

Posts 3
Mississippi

3 posted 2003-08-15 02:47 PM

Haha, that was indeed the cheesiest poem I've ever heard, and yeah.. I'd take that over angst any day!

Thanks for the laugh,
- The Big Flaming Clyde

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2004-07-05 02:47 AM

thankx everyone for your lovely comments

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

5 posted 2006-03-06 09:25 PM

it is very cheesey. but i like it. i only like melted cheese

           Jessica
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

Ace of Crimson Tears
Junior Member

since 2006-03-03

Posts 14
United States

6 posted 2006-04-10 10:46 AM

That was a nice poem. Very unique. Keep up the good work.

~Matt~

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