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Life ?!?
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Life ?!? |
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NeverSayDie Junior Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 39Duluth, MN & Grand Forks ND |
Life Made up of trials and tribulation happiness and sadness changes and constants People say love your life love others love everyone How Everyday it gets harder the blade gets closer the rope gets tighter Change Without it where would things be what would be now now what would it be Hurt Physically mentally emotionally all hurt the same all last for some time time last longer than some some last longer than time Remember life is how people change, hurt, heal and move on. Always moving ahead, not always right but always ahead. After some time I realize I live not for myself but for my life and the things in it. I have no hope no pain no emotion but it has me in a tight grip until the day it slips and life is no more. |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
Different style, but it works for this poem well, nice work ~*~Karen~*~ |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
Very real,but sad. i guess they say the truth hurts. refreshing thank you Tequilia |
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yankees01rugby Junior Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 48USA |
a very true poem. great job! |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
hey, this was very good. I could really relate to it. I hope that someday you find something or someone that truly makes life worth living. -Jen |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
This poem is simple and to the point...and for this particular topic, I think it fits. I really like how you worded this. Definitely going in my library! Nice write!  "I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..." |
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