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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
The absence of happiness invades me, And brings me to my knees. Do not let this continue, I'm begging desperately, please. Just leave me be for one moment, Let me have some time to think. Give me a few more minutes, While deeper and deeper, I sink. Every last turn is hopeless, Around the corner, no suprise. All that's left is desperation, At least what's seen through these eyes. I find no point in continuing on, It's time that the curtain's go down. My theatre is completely full, Yet no one is making a sound. As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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Star T Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182Philadelphia, US |
Everything in this poem reeked of sorrow,pain and darkness. and most especially depression and being tired of life. it is such an expressive poem and full of emotion even if its sad emotions.we all feel like that sometimes but pls my friend,dont stay too long in the pit...it hurts more than we all know. Jesus Loves u... |
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forever.yours New Member
since 2003-08-08
Posts 5 |
this is one of those poems that after u read it u kinda sit and stare..like in awe..so so so sad, yet true..everyone has or will feel this way but i promise it wont last forever.. although it was sad i have to tell ya it was awesome  keep ur head up!! |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Dude...I really liked this. AWESOME job. If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
That was so sad but so truthful and well written, do your best to struggle through, nice work ~*~Karen~*~ |
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~*Tantalize*~ Junior Member
since 2003-07-29
Posts 26Sunny California (San Francisco Bay Area) |
its like I have read this so many times, over and over, and I want to say something, but all I can do is think of what to say, so I wanted to let you know tht I read it, and am so amazed, I am speechless. Gret work, me speechless, doesn't happen often. |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Thank you all...I'm glad you like it so much. Your replies are appreciated very much. Means very much to me. Thank you! "I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..." |
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