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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-08-01 01:15 PM

I'll never be the same.
You destroyed me.
You took my heart from me,
Put it in a box and
Held it before my eyes.
Your beautiful, pale blue eyes,
Showed no emotion while
You saw my reaction.
That’s all in the past...but
It’s still fresh in my memory.
I can still feel the pain
Like it only happened yesterday...
It still brings tears to my eyes.
I gave so much of myself to you,
And got nothing...but pain in return.
I wish I could hate you for this,
But for some reason, I can't.
For some reason, I won't allow
Myself to forget you.
Before all this happened,
We were such close friends,
Now...we're less than enemies...
And despite all this,
I miss how we used to be together,
All our good times...
They, too, bring tears to my eyes...
I hate thinking about it,
Your face still haunts my dreams.
Everything about you...
You eyes, your hands, your hair,
Your lips....Your torturous ability
To be able to break someone's heart,
And not even care...
So long ago...

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-08-01 02:13 PM

yeah. Nicely put.
~Lex

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

2 posted 2003-08-03 10:03 AM

This poem seems to linger on the line of love and hate...you still love this person with everything you have, but you hate what has happened and you kind of resent that person for doing what they did. I can relate to this poem more than I'd like to say. LOL. Staci...you did an excellent job...!

Love you!

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

3 posted 2003-08-03 11:38 AM

wow, this was a beautifully put poem......it was a little draggy ( ?? ) maybe breaking it up into stanza's? maybe it's just me and early morning...i haven't had my morning wak me up'er yet....

quote:
You took my heart from me,
Put it in a box and
Held it before my eyes.
Your beautiful, pale blue eyes,

excellent work

riley

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

4 posted 2003-08-03 01:59 PM

I thought this was so hauntingly beautiful. I think we can all relate to it too - whether its a relative, friend, or significant other, everyone knows the pain of a broken relationship with someone we love. You put it into words so emotionally. Excellent job. I hope things look up for you.
Kay

Just wanna be funny,looks like the joke's on me.
So call me Captain Backfire.

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

5 posted 2003-08-03 09:21 PM

good write, i can relate.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

6 posted 2003-08-11 10:49 PM

Thanks everyone.

"Is there anyone out there cause it's getting harder and harder to breathe"~Maroon 5~

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