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Miserable Static New Member
since 2003-08-04
Posts 3 |
Divided Two different paths we take tonight Me to the left, you to the right Into the woods I gently creep You to your bed and into deep sleep. Two different paths we take tonight Me to the left, you to the right You cross the stars like a wandering dream I live in a nightmare, haunted by screams Two different paths we take tonight Me to the left, you to the right You let out a sob and tears fill your eyes I’m haunted by echoes of your tearful cries. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
hmm..beautiful picture you've painted. Its calm yet unsettling. Welcome. Excellent first post. ~Lex  |
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collarbone_girl Junior Member
since 2003-07-14
Posts 45Wonderland |
wow i usually dislike rhyming poetry, this one had me to the end though! This Cool Night Air Is Curious... |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
welcome and good piece, i do like this format, i also think there is nothing wrong with rhyming poetry i like the creativity and gives a different way to express one's thoughts and emotions. keep writing when you live you begin to die |
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~*Tantalize*~ Junior Member
since 2003-07-29
Posts 26Sunny California (San Francisco Bay Area) |
thats good.....pictures and written well. |
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Miserable Static New Member
since 2003-08-04
Posts 3 |
Thanks for the replies. ~MS~ |
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